
Herbert's writing wasn't as instantly engaging as Tolkien's or Richard Adams'. Dune is full of odd names and terminology — come to think of it, so were The Hobbit and Watership Down — yet in Herbert's case, the prose is somewhat dense and awkward, difficult to get into.
But as soon as we reach Chapter 2, which introduces the evil Baron Harkonnen and his plans to destroy our heroes, the Atreides clan, the story achieves escape velocity. Herbert does something brilliant here. He immediately tells the reader the identity of the traitor in the Atreides' midst.
So we spend the next 160 pages in a state of agonising suspense watching the characters we care about sleepwalk towards their doom, before the betrayal is finally (and bloodily) enacted and the trap is sprung.

As soon as we arrive on the planet Arrakis (Dune to you) Frank Herbert's prose really takes flight. His descriptions of the desert world bring it to vivid life: "chasms of tortured rock, patches of yellow-brown crossed by black lines of fault shattering. It was as though someone had dropped this ground from space and left it where it smashed." And "the cliff lifting golden tan in the morning light." It's obvious that, as with Edward Abbey, here we have a writer who loves the harsh beauty of his desert landscapes.

Or his depiction of the ornithopters they use to fly over the barren deserts of Arrakis. Herbert makes them seem real through small, subtle detail ("the craft creaked as the others clambered aboard") and then he deploys them in the great sequence where they have to evacuate a massive Sand Crawler vehicle because of the approach of a giant worm, bent on their destruction. The personnel pour into the Duke's squad of small ornithopters and take to the skies: "Aircraft began lifting off the sand around them. It reminded the Duke of... carrion birds lifting away from the carcass of a wild ox."

However, what really keeps the reader entranced is the intoxicating combination of action and suspense as Paul Atreides and his mother Jessica are plunged into peril after peril while they discover this strange new world.

I'm delighted that another beloved book of my childhood has withstood the years so well.
(Image credits: As usual, I have taken a selection of the covers from Good Reads. And, as usual, many of my favourites were either missing or inadequate images. So the cover of the copy I'm actually reading, with the big gold lettering by Howard J. Shaw and the Gerry Grace art featuring the guys riding the worms — spoiler alert! You shouldn't put stuff like that on the covers, you silly publishers — is from a mysterious Russian site. Beware pop-ups if you go to it.

Ha! Last week I mentioned Ed McBain's 87th Precinct novels and you replied that it was a funny coincidence
ReplyDeletebecause Ben Aaronovitch is a fan, and this week you
write about ' Dune' which, coincidentally, I have recently
been thinking about reading. Your article has made me
decide to go ahead and read Frank Herbert's novel.
Thank you.
Best regards.
I'm really enjoying Dune. I may write another entry on it when I finish it this week. And then on to the sequels!
ReplyDeleteIf you make it as far as Heretics I'd be interested in your opinion. It's my favorite and I couldn't tell you why.
ReplyDeleteHey Al, on your recommendation I shall proceed as far as Heretics... that was still by Frank writing solo, correct?
ReplyDeleteYes. I'd recommend total avoidance of Brian Herbert's sequels. I tried a few but they are largely awful, simple space adventures set in the Dune universe.
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